Bob the horse

hi its Madds this week i have been working on a narrative

and we could pick from a couple of photo to write a narrative on. 

i choose a horse that got stuck in a tree and he ate himself out of it..

i spent all week on this hope you like it  

here it is 

BOB THE HORSE 

 Bob was a very chunky horse, he had  extremely  short legs like a bird and he had a hectic face . He  liked to jump in tiny ponds  also likes to run around but he is really slow . bob is usually really happy but he gets bullied by other horses or being ugly but he always cheers himself up with food.

The setting has big bumpy rocks on the bright lime green grass, small skinny brunches like a noodle 

Massive puddles that look like rusty dirt,dark broccoli looking bushes .The fence looks like a giraffe neck and how long it is . dirt muddy like wet paint.he had to sleep to the smell of  poo.

One day bob the fantastic horse  was running around then when he was running around  he ran into a tree he was stuck there for ages a year later he was still in the tree he started to eat the tree because this was the only way he could get out but it would take  hours to get a piece  but he was getting fatter and fatter and fatter to where he could not eat anymore ,he knew he wanted to get out  so he keep on going  after awhile he fell a sleep he woke up to be wet  because h it rained overnight ,inside it was full of water  so he took a big drink  then went back to work to eating bark  off the  months later he got his  head unstuck  but he was super fat.a little girl found him  sitting over  on the tree   as soon as she saw him she called the vet as soon as possible after his surgery he was fine as an star