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Can He Save Her?

Narrative Writing

Hi this week for writing the name is can he save her i worked  hard on making this story up

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WALT: write a narrative that is descriptive (paints a picture in the reader's mind)

This week we are creating a piece of narrative writing about a comic book hero!

You are to use the picture on the left as your story starter or even your story finisher. Not sure what this means? Well, the picture could be telling you what is happening in the beginning of your story. You would describe the events from the picture then tell your audience what happens next. Or if you’re using the picture as your story ending, what are the events that led to this action packed scene?

Fill in the table below to help you plan.

Planning:	Your Thoughts and Answers:
Are you using the picture as the beginning or ending of your story?	End
Heroes:	Spiderman/peter parker and batman
Villain:	Joker
Other Characters (if any):	Skyla
Problem:	The joker pushed spiderman and the lady in a dishwasher and then fall off a tall building
Solution:	Spiderman saves her life and the joker dies
If beginning, what could happen next?	The mystery intensifies...
If ending, what happened before this scene?	The plot is discovered by the joker

Start Writing Here:  one sunny day Peter Parker woke up to  a hard busy working  day ahead,he woke up to the  church bell DING DONG DING DONG,Peter parker's ears were all most bleeding from the bell peter parker said to his mum(by the way he lived by the church)  . his mother made him homemade pancakes turned in to a sweet pancake burrito he ate his pancakes as fast as the flash.”bye mum”said peter parker.peter parker ran as fast as he can he made just in time. now let's check skyla.

skyla is in bed not even ready  to go to school she was in bed not even worrying about the time but the bell rang for school.now she got ready as fast as she could 3.2.1.she ran like a cheetah,she arrived to her history class

“YOUR LATE “said the teacher 3 seconds later “hahahahah”(by the way she was in the hall)”who do we have here follow me to the rooftop.when they arrived  to the rooftop “hahaahahahaahahah fooled you (the joker pushes her in a dishwasher)”she calls out for spiderman before he shut the door.

Don't worry spiderman is here, skyla thinks in her head what a stupid saying a the joker pushes the dishwasher of the 23456789 building in new york city.sipderman shoot his web at the dishwasher but he was not strong enough he went done with her  

Sipderman dropped to the floor catching the dishwasher.  

After Spiderman saved  skyla, he found the Joker in his underwater base planning for his next attack. spider man grabbed him by the neck and said “your going to jail” after all work skyla KISSED  him on the cheek and said “thank you spiderman”. spider man ran away in shock thinking his crush would kiss him after that spiderman got into his unicorn pyjamas and went in to his kittycorn bed and said to himself “that was a hard working day . “